I thought the track was pretty good. I got into the intro relatively quickly and could see it wasn't trying to be complicating and had a fair bit of 'emotion' (which was what you were going for).
Really enjoyed the track a lot more when it kicked in, but couldn't help but feel the kick could have been a little more punchy through the compression (down to personnel preference I suppose). The synths were great and varied and you used a good amount of FX's and White Noise without drowning out the song itself (I liked the Rain Drop effect at roughly 3.56).
Overall: Great song with lots of uplifting/emotional sounds, and my review was down to personnel preference and not professionalism (as I am still learning as well!).
4/5 - Well done Sir.